The diagrams below show stages in the development on simple cooking equipment.

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The diagrams below show stages in the development on simple cooking equipment.

Given is the diagram illustrating the development of a simple cooking tool into a more compound one.

Referring to the information bar it can be said that, the pot shown in the first graph is slightly higher than the others and stood on the stones. On the second stage, it gradually developed into another one and looked as a small circle dish surrounded with a clay shield. Additionally, it had some stones inside, probably for keeping heat for the long period.

As the development persisted, the indicated item continue to develop and subsequently, a more complex object was invented. It consis...

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Sentence: As the development persisted, the indicated item continue to develop and subsequently, a more complex object was invented.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace continue with verb, past tense

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