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The diagrams below show stages in the development on simple cooking equipment.
Given is the diagram illustrating the development of a simple cooking tool into a more compound one.
Referring to the information bar it can be said that, the pot shown in the first graph is slightly higher than the others and stood on the stones. On the second stage, it gradually developed into another one and looked as a small circle dish surrounded with a clay shield. Additionally, it had some stones inside, probably for keeping heat for the long period.
As the development persisted, the indicated item continue to develop and subsequently, a more complex object was invented. It consis...
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Sentence: As the development persisted, the indicated item continue to develop and subsequently, a more complex object was invented.
Description: The fragment item continue to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace continue with verb, past tense
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 173 200
No. of Characters: 800 1000
No. of Different Words: 109 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.627 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.624 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.706 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.223 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.643 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.017 0.07
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