Some people believe that laws changr human behavior.Do you agree with the opinion?
In recent decades, there has been considerable debate regarding the role of laws which has incredibly changed the human behavior.I firmly concur with the opinion of applying the law to control the human illegal activities.In this essay, I will elucidate the roles of law how it helps our nation to achieve peace and prosperity.
To commence with, law create obstacles on the way of the person usually supposed to commit crime.Law booms up the feeling of fear in the person.Befofe attempting any henious activity, he certainly imagine the dire consequences.From my personal experience , a qualitative research was conducted by an eminenet sociologist to explore the further restrictions and limitations.Subsequently, final results revealed that there is highly complex relationship between the law and the human behavior even though all the policies and tasks should be taken into consideration.
Furthermore, it reminds a person about his responsibility to keep our nation protected.Without laws,people will become ill-mannered or more prone to worse activities.For an instance, a quantitative research was carried out by Melbourne University.Hence ,perhaps scientific research significantly correlated with law and the shaping of human nature.The preliminary feeling is closely associated with the well being of humans.
To recapitulate, according to the preceding discussion ,I am inclined with the notion of strict implications of law so that risk of attemplting crimes or any other deletrious activity could be mitigated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73127753304 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67401209599 2.71678728327 135% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691629955947 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.5024630542 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.569557214 50.4703680194 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.25 104.977214359 310% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.75 20.9669160288 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223126953667 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12605673112 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520807307329 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12605673112 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520807307329 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 12.6369458128 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 53.1260098522 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.54236453202 278% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 10.9458128079 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.6 8.32886699507 151% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.94827586207 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.3980295567 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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