The given to circular layout illustrate the information about percentage of online shopping reduction and deductions In four different sectors in one country; New Zealand in the time period of 2003 and 2013.
Overall, at the beginning of the period books contributed the least to the online sales of New Zealand. While, travel was the most significant online sale sector. In comparison, At the end of the period film and music made the highest contribution and the lowest contribution was made by Clothes sector.
It can be seen that, travel sector accounted for 36% of New Zealand online sale in 2003, and experienced more than 5% decreased in 2013. Whereas, film and music demand was 21% in 2013 and had effective growth of 12% in 2013. At the beginning of the period books and clothes made up 19% and 24% of New Zealand online sector in 2003 respectively.
Probing ahead, clothes, which comprised almost 16% in New Zealand’s online trend in 2013. Moreover, film and music touch the highest point at 33% in 2013, which is on increasing side, as compare to 2003. As we as,Trend was concerned demand of online books shopping was increased in 2013.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ast to the online sales of New Zealand. While, travel was the most significant online...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86802030457 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67608513069 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527918781726 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2015305824 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270128364771 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122341842704 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603013872374 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180026826529 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475258627171 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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