In view of the reading, the author claims that in advert of the Moon and Mars, there is no chance for living on Venus by human, by pointing out 3 reasons of support. Finding the statements questionable, the lecturer casts doubt on the claim made by the article and presents some evidence in contrary.
At first, the author argues that so high is the atmospheric pressure on the Venus that it is not possible to human can have common life on it since in every square there is a force of 100 kilometers. It has been noted that in this condition, a spacecraft will be destroyed if human will try to landed on Venus. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the pressure on the surface of the Venus is not too high and the high pressure is related to atmosphere of it. So, it is possible to flow the station on 50 kilometers of the surface.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that there is no water or oxygen on the Venus and owing to the fact that human need to use these materials, there is no chance for living on the Venus. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes this point by clarifying the fact that there are different compound on the Venus which provide the condition of water and oxygen production by doing chemical process easily.
Finally, the author asserts insuffisient sunlight that emit on surface of the Venus as the last point for supporting no life oportunity for human there. The lecturer, though, dismisses it by saying that clouds are in distant of 50 kilometers of the Venus surface but they still can reflect much of the sunlight. Besides, there is a little sunlight that provid directly by sun. So, it can be enough for living and people can use power station for having electricity.
- tpo 51 3
- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task A little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a "burning mirror": a polished co 81
- Advantages and disadvantages of imposing high taxes on cigarettes and unhealthy foods. 81
- history courses for students 73
- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'compounds'?
Suggestion: compounds
...fying the fact that there are different compound on the Venus which provide the conditio...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, conversely, finally, first, if, so, still, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55448717949 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4869791586 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2858243518 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06452816374 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330861551418 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118482518944 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545933491137 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188421152516 0.162205337803 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794555616 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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