As the world population and technology rapidly grow, we are now facing a problem in people mobilization. Since the business is mostly run in downtown, offices are built there and it's forcing people to work and travel to the center of the city. The mobilization itself is supported by public transportation and private vehicles. In most big cities, congestion during rush hour is something that can not be avoided due to the high number of mobilization. Therefore, there has been some discussion to reduce it by not allowing vehicle in downtown area.
Some societies support that solution because t...
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thanks E-rater. that was
thanks E-rater. that was quick. ah, I missed that.
some groups are not agree because
some groups do not agree because
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