The pie charts above give a percentage about water consumption in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world.
It is clear from the chart that both San Diego and California consume the most water for residential demand while global population uses least of the water for that purpose. In contrast, agricultural water accounts for the highest percentage all over the world, whereas it is used least in San Diego and California.
According to the graphs, water used for industry in San Diego and in worldwide has the same percentage (23%) which was exactly 10% lower than in California. San Diego citizens consume up to 60% for of their domestic life while California only uses two thirds of that much (39%).
Although the two separate countries consume lots of water for that aim, people in the rest of the world just use almost one tenth the total amount of water (8%). Because of using a large amount of water for residential and industrial purpose, San Diego becomes the country which uses the least water for agriculture (17%) whereas the rate of California is 11% higher than San Diego’s. Planting is the main reason that worldwide people use water for with the percentage of approximate 70%.
The pie charts above give a percentage about water consumption in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world.
It is clear from the chart that both San Diego and California consume the most water for residential demand while global population uses least of the water for that purpose. In contrast, agricultural water accounts for the highest percentage all over the world, whereas it is used least in San Diego and California.
According to the graphs, water used for industry in San Diego and in worldwide has the same percentage (23%) which was exactly 10% lower than in California. San Diego citizens consume up to 60% for of their domestic life while California only uses two thirds of that much (39%).
Although the two separate countries consume lots of water for that aim, people in the rest of the world just use almost one tenth the total amount of water (8%). Because of using a large amount of water for residential and industrial purpose, San Diego becomes the country which uses the least water for agriculture (17%) whereas the rate of California is 11% higher than San Diego’s. Planting is the main reason that worldwide people use water for with the percentage of approximate 70%.
- The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011 73
- The pie graphs above show the different amount of water used for residential needs, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego, California and the World. It is clear that the water usage in the three places is generally different. In San Diego and 67
- The table above compares the differences in the sales of coffee and banana whose Fairtrade labels had been attached in five countries in Europe in the two years of 1999 and 2004.It is clear that over the five-year period, the UK is still ranked the highes 73
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone? 78
- The pie charts above give a percentage about water consumption in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world. It is clear from the chart that both San Diego and California consume the most water for residential demand while global population u 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85024154589 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55911006376 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512077294686 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9511387163 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.609575671883 0.215688989381 283% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.32779289015 0.103423049105 317% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21237402448 0.0843802449381 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.47072881399 0.15604864568 302% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186776729625 0.0819641961636 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.