do you agree or disagree with the following statement? teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
That respecting teacher plays an important role in society is an undeniable fact. Should we realize the significance of teaching in society, we will ponder over it much more scrupulously. therefore, teachers are respected by people in the past and nowadays. this issue that we can how to respect teacher has recently been the topic debate among parents.
I believe that teachers are respected by students and parents and society appreciated them similar to past, and these are my justification, to begin with, teaching kind of the holly job in our culture and people believe that their leaders are the teacher, therefore they respect the teacher. the second reason why I advocate this point of view liaising the fact that its income, nowadays teachers earn a lot of money and they have luxury cars and a house. they wear thy expensive clothes and we know that some people respect other based on their appearance so they respect teacher a lot because they are rich. the last but not the least it is well-established fact that teachers have really important fact in our lives and our government tries to opt teachers among intelligent people, therefore, this kind of people know how to attract respect of others. Hence they are popular and appreciated by society.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view. I would rather look at it from another perspective as well, my father is a teacher and whenever we go out, I see that my father appreciated and valued by society.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideratu=ion, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. underestimating the significance of appreciating to teachers in our society is not logical. attending to this issue meticulously contributes to having a perfect society and our children are been trained very well. and can improve several aspects of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02922077922 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90150586699 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7515333162 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164211432143 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614471203585 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465649111921 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927828762078 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336453892855 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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