The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
A glance at the pie charts reveals the quantity of money that a children's charity situated in USA spent as well as received in one year in the past
It is evident from the information provided that the donated food made up by far the highest proportion in revenue sources whereas a major part of expenditures went on program services.
To be more specific, the revenue resources had the total amount of 53,561,580 dollars, which is slightly higher than that of spending, with 53,224,960. Communitty contributions accounted for 10% of incomes of this charity, which five fold the firgure of prog...
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Sentence: Communitty contributions accounted for 10 of incomes of this charity, which fivefold the firgure of program revenue.
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