A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The topic states that all students should be studying similar coursework until high school before entering college. Widescale implementation of this rule is tedious, but once applied, will mostly be beneficial for all the students, especially from the rural area, or from a humble background. However, implementation of this rule will be harder, because of the cost associated with it. Though a quixotic scenario, still, studying and having the same curriculum for all the students of a nation until high school, will be a good thing.
To begin with, the implementation of this curriculum throughout all the schools of the country will benefit the students. Often, to get admission into the good colleges, students have to take personal coaching outside schools. Private tuitions are booming because of the incompetence of the coursework in different education boards and the schools. As an example, our country has different educational councils in different states, and they tend to have a different curriculum. After high school, while applying for good colleges, most of the students have to cover a large number of unknown topics from private tutors, which will surely be checked by implementing the same curriculum throughout the country.
Furthermore, the execution of the same curriculum throughout the country will help bring down the cost and time spent to attain extra courses cum tuitions outside school premises. Students and enthusiasts from the rural area and humble background will be benefitted because they don't have to spend money to gain extra knowledge to get admission in good colleges. Students all over the country will be learning the same thing and will get experience in the same skillset, which will be beneficial in their life after school.
But, implementation of the same curriculum throughout the nation will be a tedious job. It will cost a fortune to run similar equipments and appoint highly trained people in every schools, which in turn, will increase the cost of education. If education till high school becomes costly will surely affect the number of attendees.
To sum it up, all of the students from a nation learning the same curriculum will be a good thing when perceiving from a students viewpoint. Money spent for high school education will be less and the skills will be effective. Although, executing the rule will be a hard task due to the cost associated with it. If cost and employment of highly skilled people is not an issue, then this endeavour will likely to taste success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ges, most of the students have to cover a large number of unknown topics from private tutors, whi...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...kground will be benefitted because they dont have to spend money to gain extra knowl...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n, will increase the cost of education. If education till high school becomes cost...
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... number of attendees. To sum it up, all of the students from a nation learning the sam...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... be a good thing when perceiving from a students viewpoint. Money spent for high school ...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... less and the skills will be effective. Although, executing the rule will be a hard task...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15496368039 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77609848394 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455205811138 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4545216645 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.052631579 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21692040318 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084337595753 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968889784071 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139659232547 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766532934088 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.