At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Education is the backbone of a nation and Universities and colleges are considered the highest peak of teaching where students have the facilities to furnished their knowledge. Most of us always consider university and college is only for them who can adhere themselves in classes and libraries so, university and college should have most financial support. But others think sports and social activities are as important as the universities and colleges so, they should also require financial support. In my opinion, I also think sports and social activities are just as important as the universities and colleges so they should get equally financial support.
Education can only help a student to achieve a certain success and to be educated one has to go the universities and colleges. But if universities and colleges are going to get all the importance in our lives, then what happens to our health and social life. Sports keep us active through body movement which is really helpful to maintain a healthy life and keep us away from illness. And social activities give us the privileges to do some useful things for the society.
For example, social activity like, teaching the poor kids who are deprived of getting an education can help them to get educated which will boost their morale so they will be able to sort out between right or wrong. For this kind of activity financial support is needed for sport and social activity.
An educated person is an asset for the society as they contribute to the well being of the society. But that does not mean that an educated person should always keep them to some desk job, the person could not choose sportsmanship as their carrier. A sportsman is well recognized in our society as well as the person who devoted himself or herself for the well being for the society by participating in the social activities. A sportsman and a social activist both of them represent their country to the world. If we consider Olympic and United Nations as an example we can see that sportsman and social activists are the ones who are really presenting their country to the world. So we should consider them as one of the sectors where we can invest money.
Sports and social activities are equally important as universities and colleges as they can help us to find out the people who can represent our country. So I think sports and social activities should receive equal financial support as universities and colleges libraries and classes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...to sort out between right or wrong. For these kind of activity financial support is needed...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as universities and colleges as they can help us to find out the people who can r...
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
... universities and colleges as they can help us to find out the people who can represent our co...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eople who can represent our country. So i think sports and social activities shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, well, as to, for example, i think, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89573459716 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66005578284 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412322274882 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3264486571 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.777777778 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363452534601 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140377963127 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153364076693 0.0737576698707 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236016374183 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157176244414 0.0645574589148 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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