According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the last year. Clearly, the content of these reviews is not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not in the quality of our movies but with public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater quantity of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
In following Argument, Superscreen express thoughts about their viewrs. According to recent survey, fewer people attended super screen-produced movies than in any other year. However, the percentage of positive reviews increases, but the contents of these reviews are not reach enough of their prospective viewers. So superscreen believe that they should allocate great share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising. But these argument doesn't contain any strong fact that can prove that people loosing interest in super-screen produced movies because of public's lack awareness about movies.
In the first survey, it is clear that only fewer number of people attended super screen-produced movies compare any other year. If people are attending this movies before current year then, it is clearly define that people had interested before. The reason for decrease that could be people don't have any interest in this type of movies. Percentage of positive reviews increases in current year, but that not provide precise data. Survey should be based on statistical information. How many people attended super screen-produced movies?, how many people had give positive reviews about movies? Moreover people attended movies then, of course those people have some interest in movies. So increase in percentage might be effect of this because many people might give positive review.
Here the director of the Super Screen Movie also made one assumption that public's lack awareness about the good quality movie can be reason. This is clear that, people attending movie before the current year then, people have the knowledge about movie. By this all information one can not say that people don't know about the availability of good quality movie. But inversely this all assumption suggest that people loosing interest in Super Screen -produced movies.
Thus, argument doesn't provide any strong fact that can prove the decrease in number of people who have interest in super screen-produced movies.Therefore, It will be risky step to share greater amount of budget in advertisement.Because if people already loose interest in this type of movies then, Nothing can bring them into interest.
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Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1825 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.214 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.571 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.029 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.395 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.54 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Essay evaluation report
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https://www.testbig.com/gmatgre-argument-task-essays/following-taken-me…
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1825 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.214 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.571 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.029 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.395 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.54 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Competition and cooperation are the two ...
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Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Cooperative
... are the two different word in industry.Cooperative industry works together with one or mor...
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Compitition
...ether with one or more than one company.Compitition is comparable entity between two compan...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...comparable entity between two companies.I agree with the first point that is the ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...illing in them a sense of cooperation. Moreover, It is obvious that if 10 compa...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...ther company has to pay all expeditures it self.Other Reason is also that if company ha...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Other
...pany has to pay all expeditures it self.Other Reason is also that if company has some...
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Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ous method can be revealed to progress. Because each company participating in same subj...
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Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...h company participating in same subject.By helping each other, company can get mor...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch other, company can get more profit. In Government, political leader require ...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...In Government, political leader require to take responsible desicion.Leader has to work...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Leader
...er require to take responsible desicion.Leader has to work with many people in around ...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...an not work with people surrounding him.That make harmful for political work.So soci...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...im.That make harmful for political work.So society always try to choose leader who...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...d can understand the problem of society.So it is require to have cooperative sense...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...erstand the problem of society.So it is require to have cooperative sense in political ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cooperative sense in political leader. In Industry, It is also require that mos...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... In Industry, It is also require that most industry should work together...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Competition
...try should work together to get benefit.Competition can bring one company in zenith positio...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Like
... bring a great deal of success for them.Like country, India, There are many big coop...
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Line 4, column 440, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...ike TCS, Infosys, L&T, TATA, MARUTI etc.These company have made many progression by c...
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Line 4, column 440, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'These companies'?
Suggestion: This company; These companies
...ike TCS, Infosys, L&T, TATA, MARUTI etc.These company have made many progression by cooperati...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can progress in any kind of situation. At the end i believe that if society wan...
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Line 6, column 49, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... At the end i believe that if society want to prepare...
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Line 6, column 148, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...n progressive and beneficial manner then, best way is to teach young people the knowle...
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Line 6, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Cooperation
... of cooperation rather than competition.Cooperation will bring more success than competitio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, while, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4010989011 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27712133008 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1257418431 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.727272727 118.986275619 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0909090909 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220815051909 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852753884247 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134753983132 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137512190656 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164600983373 0.0667264976115 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 14.1392134831 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 48.8420337079 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.