Some people think cars are a better way of transportation around the city, while others prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are different modes of transpiration available for moving around the city. While some people prefer to use cars, many tend to prefer cycling for this purpose. This essay will discuss why usage of cars have some advantages but why cycling is much better way of a transportation within at city out of these two options.
Cars are certainly the most convenient mode of transportation. A person can travel a long distance within a city in a comparatively short time and in the most comfortable atmosphere by using a car. Time saved in transportation can be used for other more productive tasks. For example, one study shows that people who use cars for daily transport save around sixty hours annually on an average in comparison to people who do not use cars. As cars are time efficient and comfortable compared to other methods, some people prefer them for travelling around the city.
Although cars are more convenient, cycling is a healthier and an eco-friendly way especially for transportation within a city. People who do not have time to exercise due to their hectic work schedule, bicycles can serve dual purpose for them if they use bicycles for commuting to and from workplace. Also cycling is very environment friendly as no harmful pollutants are released by the use of bicycles. Also, if more people started using bicycles then traffic congestion and parking problems can significantly reduced within a city. Hence, cycling is healthier and environment friendly mode of city transport compared to cars.
Nowadays, number of people prefer bicycles over cars for travelling within a city. This essay discussed why travelling by cars is more convenient method but why cycling is a more healthier and environmentally superior method for a city transport. In my opinion, cycling is better mode for a city transport as it is eco-friendly and good for health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
...es for commuting to and from workplace. Also cycling is very environment friendly as...
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Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
... convenient method but why cycling is a more healthier and environmentally superior method for...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'city transport'.
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...and environmentally superior method for a city transport. In my opinion, cycling is better mode ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'city transport'.
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... my opinion, cycling is better mode for a city transport as it is eco-friendly and good for heal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94568239039 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0971864969 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242690448825 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975440791609 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067413373499 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176003455816 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599339352751 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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