Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organization. To what extend do you agree?
Distribution of wages among the employees with different hierarchy level has always been a debatable issue. Some people believe that senior management deserves high amount of salaries compared to the other workers within the same organization. This essay will argue why it is a good thing to have a higher wages for senior management positions.
Employees at lower level of hierarchy may believe that senior manager should not be paid such a huge amount of salaries. They argue that they are the ones who actually carry out all the work and distribution of wages should be more equal. Foe example, developers at a software company are responsible for actual product development. So they might believe that they should be paid fair amount of the profit generated by the product and senior managers and CEO should not be paid such a huge amount of profit share.
Senior management employees should be paid higher salaries as they have mountain of responsibilities over their head. Single mistake on their part can affect the business of an entire organization. For example, failure failure of the senior management in decision making resulted in downfall of NOKIA as a brand which was number one mobile phone company at its peak time. Hence, as senior are responsible for development and sustenance of entire organization, they deserve very high salaries.
This essay argued why it is absolutely a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries. In my opinion, managers at top level are the backbone of an entire organization and deserve such a huge amount of salaries that they are currently receiving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: failure
...of an entire organization. For example, failure failure of the senior management in decision ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, may, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09701492537 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77466460036 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503731343284 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9512955633 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284325261898 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11951262754 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121601162032 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209042940375 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104703964377 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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