Modern communication system benefit many people yet there are some that oppose to them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.
Nowadays, Communication play are most important role in our life. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. One such issue here is communication system. This particular topic assent that is communication system is benefit or not. Through this essay, I will examine question from both point of view.
To begin with, Modern communicate system are very beneficial for our life. Because nowadays people are doing easily communicate with the help of internet. Moreover, People using each and every social sites that is why we can gain knowledge and doing talk to which other person in all nation. We can also learn every types of language. Furthermore, Now time we can send a message and other things which the help of these Systems.
Addingfurther, People should do not use mobile phone because it is not good for health. Whenever, People use mobile phone then it is more effect for eyes. Many children use the mobile phone that is why they do not interest in study. They dont talk with parents. Furthermore, Many people use to social site and do play games in mobile phone then they do not to play outdoor games that is why physical is not well.
Conclusion, Communicate is also important part of our life but, People should use to limted for mobile phones. they look after to take a physical health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86776859504 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66240153642 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1875517951 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6153846154 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181988843453 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698762724764 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678449832548 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106581091846 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293414493946 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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