We should pay attention to the opinions of famous people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is undeniable that famous people have significant role in our society. We hear news about their life and activities in the society. Some people agree that we should pay attention to the opinions of famous people, whistle others disagree. I agree with the statement and these are my justifications.
To begin with, the opinions of famous people are crucial for many individuals. As an evidence of this, mostly younger people look at the life and activities of famous people. They take them as inspiring people in their life and eager to accomplish the activities as their role model. For instance, if a young person is sporty then popular player such as Christiano Ronaldo, Neymar Junior can be inspiring. Consequently, they seek to play effectively by applying tricks and ideas of their favourite players.
In addition to that, if people watch the character of famous people helping in the progress of the society. Ultimately, individuals will be inspired from them and fascinates to involve in the development programmes of the community.
In conclusion, I completely agree with this statement. I think popular people have utmost role in the progress of the society and they can be inspired people for the individuals living in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and ideas of their favourite players. In addition to that, if people watch the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10731707317 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85034203777 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556097560976 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6444927533 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.5384615385 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132877923641 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586221202094 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100891316878 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889253974824 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973707025605 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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