I strongly disagree with the opinion "In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today" because need for cars and preference for different cars are increasing every single day. In early days of usage of car was majorly considered as status signature but later on with growth of time people realized its importance. It has gain importance within every people belonged to all regions irrespective of their caste,color,creed,nationality. Its has been valued for its convenience in reaching everyone's destination mostly on time if used properly.
I do agree that by developing times mode of communication has been increased like public transport including buses,metros,monorail etc. But in country like United States cars are still most preferred over any other mode of transport. Hence it will grow in a similar way to the growing population.More the babies born in country more the requirement for cars will increase once they will grow to required age of driving.
Nowadays life is so fast that no one can think of losing a single minute of their time. Everyday starts with rushing to office, drop of the kids to school or day care and so on. Hardly a few can think of waiting for bus for scheduled bus routes which is not frequent. Car is the best way to reach to destination without wasting people's time.
Few people do have craze to owe unique cars as holding ownership of unique cars do attracts others.These kind of people want car as their luxury and status.
I believe that by passing of time need and demand for cars will increase. As a result more cars will be manufactured and more will be sold.
On a concluding note i will say cars are important for present days and will be most important even future .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n early days of usage of car was majorly considered as status signature but later...
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... all regions irrespective of their caste,color,creed,nationality. Its has been valued ...
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Suggestion: , nationality
... irrespective of their caste,color,creed,nationality. Its has been valued for its convenienc...
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Suggestion: , metros
...ed like public transport including buses,metros,monorail etc. But in country like Unite...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...erred over any other mode of transport. Hence it will grow in a similar way to the gr...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...r mode of transport. Hence it will grow in a similar way to the growing population.More the babi...
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...ng peoples time. Few people do have craze to owe unique cars as holding ownership...
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Suggestion: These
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ore will be sold. On a concluding note i will say cars are important for present...
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...s and will be most important even future .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12078459298 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3525574021 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307467398468 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938964225325 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113805560958 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158721899876 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934107386572 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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