Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.

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...thy goals rather than follow ones dream.The reason behind the claim is also justifi...
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...ioritize their own dreams over anything.They often try to do every possible things t...
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... possible things to achieve their dream.Often they become selfish in their trajectory...
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...they become selfish in their trajectory.For example Some people may want to become ...
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...want to become rich as soon as possible.They want a luxurious life without a single ...
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...xurious life without a single hard work.Some people may want to become rich by creat...
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... become rich by creating social turmoil.They prefer robbing,killing ,murdering ,smug...
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...ch person in the shortest possible time.As a result dreams like these are often co...
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...ot followed entirely. On the other hand,people with worthy goals have figured out the ...
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...the right path to carry on their dreams.In their voyage they are quite careful abo...
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...e careful about choosing the right path.For example if the goal of anyone is to ser...
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...al of anyone is to serve for the country ,in any condition he is ready to serve fo...
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...ion he is ready to serve for his nation.He can not be selfish and just flee away f...
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...ish and just flee away form his service.For the safety of his country he is even re...
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...ry he is even ready to give up his life.This type of worthy goal thus never be selfi...
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... his life.This type of worthy goal thus never be selfish and always be emphasized In co...
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... and always be emphasized In conclusion,the fact of choosing worthy goals should al...
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...mphasized over choosing only ones dream.Because choosing worthy goals can only bring a...
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...mphasized over choosing only ones dream.Because choosing worthy goals can only bring a...
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...ed over choosing only ones dream.Because choosing worthy goals can only bring abo...
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...ring about the prosperity with the goal.So it should be emphasized over dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 237.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10126582278 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76554517816 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 23.0359550562 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 227.832296998 60.3974514979 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 403.0 118.986275619 339% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.0 23.4991977007 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.6666666667 5.21951772744 530% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229653457814 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16963282592 0.0831039109588 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467336907092 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145304205939 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561116167311 0.0667264976115 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.1 14.1392134831 298% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.71 48.8420337079 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 11.2143820225 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 11.7820224719 289% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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