"In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed". Does a common man suffers from a group's ideology?
Express your opinion and support the same with reason and examples.
Historically, around the world most of the wars were result of the conflict of ideas. The common people get killed in the war of ideas. I tend to believe that a common man suffers to the extreme from a group's ideology. This essay will elaborate further by providing relevant arguments and examples.
Different ideologies are a root cause of several wars in the world which ultimately harm the common citizens. More specifically, when two groups of people have individual believes toward any aspect of life whether it is religion, cast or creed, or anything else then it result into a clash or conflict. The conflict between Israel and Palestine, for instance, killing the normal people on daily basis. As a result of such conflict war happens which devastate the common people lives and destroy everything.
In some cases these conflicts take the form of political wars within the nation or sometimes cross border. In other words, when one ideology group start considering themselves as more superior than other and want them to follow their rules and when the other group deny to do so then also war occurs. A recent study has shown that the number of common citizens getting killed in such wars of ideology have skyrocketed drastically in recent years in some Islamic states. Thus, it is lucid to say that these kind of wars mainly harm common people.
This essay discussed how the wars emerge from the conflict between two groups of ideologies kill normal individuals. In my opinion, undoubtedly a group's ideology makes a common people suffer a lot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...ommon man suffers to the extreme from a groups ideology. This essay will elaborate fur...
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Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
...cast or creed, or anything else then it result into a clash or conflict. The conflict ...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...y group start considering themselves as more superior than other and want them to follow their rul...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny doing'.
Suggestion: deny doing
...ow their rules and when the other group deny to do so then also war occurs. A recent study...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...c states. Thus, it is lucid to say that these kind of wars mainly harm common people. Thi...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...dividuals. In my opinion, undoubtedly a groups ideology makes a common people suffer a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus, for instance, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91634980989 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54168218555 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6152698512 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 2.75862068966 507% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257602232787 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106516741333 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819864615502 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182531442156 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064381563442 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.