It is vivid that friends full a noticeable huge part of our lives and every individual at least holds one relationship that represents them with a tangible fulfillment. But the scheme of having one strong friendship or trying to make other new ones instead of amplifying the existing have always been a controversy. personally I support the later one for following reasons:
to begin with the secure feeling from the friends who have been with you for life time is priceless. feeling that there are always people who you be trusted to be with you and take your side even in life and death decisions something that not every one has been gifted with. In addition trust for the newly met friends is something that an individual can't expect to be payed back and honored.
the other proof that can be named for the argument is that the shoulder people frequently look for through tough moments are the familiar ones not the stranger's! You can always easily whack up your pains, obstacles and feelings with some one who know you well and ask for help but you can't always expect the feedback you need from one that you barely met.
at last the real care and love is something that brings the commenters of this debate to second thoughts. it is most obvious that the ones whom have passed their friendship tests are the ones who get to be presented with the love and the care they deserve the most. This is some thing that can be achieved only by time and nothing else.
to wrap up it is true that meeting new people may supply you with the opportunities and lucks that you could have never imagined of but at the end it is the old friends that you celebrate this chance! extrapolating from the mentioned the conclusion is that strengthening the friendships is more beneficial in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, second, so, then, well, at least, in addition, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.603125 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44094108068 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51875 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.0442328108 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.3 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196650613993 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834331991691 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587228606512 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117747104346 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441383425193 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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