Whether the design of the building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work?
It is a highly debatable issue that designs of the building have a positive impact on the life of people. Some people say that it plays a crucial role in one’s life while some ignore the stance. However, I firmly believe that the designs of the building have a positive impact on people’s life.
To begin with the positive side, there are myriad benefits to having the modern design of the building. The modern design of the building lifts the creative thinking of the employees. Moreover, in the latest design of buildings, people should not worry about the parking as well as the other material facilities like fire safety, security surveillance with a closed circuit camera. For example, currently, if the building plant has not above-mentioned facilities then, the corporation does not approve the draft plan of the building which came into the notice so it is a very crucial thing.
Another pivotal aspect of my stance is that the flow of natural sources such as air and sunlight in the building can have the tremendous effect on the workforce. Besides, unlike the electric light and air-conditioner air, the maximum touch of natural sources keep away inevitable diseases which are immensely important for the people.
To conclude, from the aforesaid arguments, it is quite noticeable that the modern design of the building has the immense benefit not only in term of the facility but health factors are also there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lity but health factors are also there.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04184100418 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6872154884 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573221757322 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1822000335 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353071774116 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160968290983 0.0925447433944 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158744944844 0.071462118173 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197405574626 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178009582726 0.0609392437508 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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