Today the world is developed and everyone wants to live a modern and luxurious life. Many companies had set their market globally and introduce newer products to fulfill one's needs. Advertisement is the new and trending way of marketing used by the companies. Along with the new product ads are developed by the company to promote the sale of a product. I strongly agree the point,advertisement helps to improve our lives. It gives us awareness demonstration and negotiation idea of the product.
Firstly,the advertisement gives the awareness of the product. It explains the specifications of a product sweetly and in understandable way. For example,the specification oppo mobile phone like processor,ram,internal memory, etc are mentioned in the ads. One has no need to waste time while reading the boring broucher of the product. The ads are sweet and attractive, so we easily get idea of the product.
Secondly, the demonstration of a product are shown in ads. It tells the functional use of the product to attract the customer. For example,in oppo mobile phone ads, the brand ambassador uses the phone,clicks the photos to show the clarity of an oppo camera. It distinguishes the ordinary camera with oppo camera. Demo show in advertisement give the intact information about the product in short time.
Another benefit of advertisement is, it gives the idea about the rate of the product. The price of an mobile is directly shown in ads, so no chance to get looted while purchasing. We get the idea about the price which help us to bargain with the shopkeeper. This bargaining can get a attractive deals from the shopkeepers like selfie stick,pen drive free on the product.
In my opinion,advertisement plays a major role in everybody's life to know about the new product and its range available in market. Which can definitely improve one's own life. To conclude,above evidances shows that the advertisement gives the awareness and demonstration of a product with the best deals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11963190184 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33846209249 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6861967573 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5652173913 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1739130435 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23236051392 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750002473636 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528113090014 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135575589508 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340155839046 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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