It is absolutely correct, for well informed of something any person should be provided with many different information.So i agree with the statement for different reasons which i will explore in the following paragraph.
First,information is the main source to be updated of something necessary.When the person is well informed then it will be easy for the person to do any work easily and quickly.There is less change of misunderstanding and errors in the work.Well known person can easily handle other for example if someone is running business and if the owner provide well information about the company's rules and regulations and monitory system as well as other necessary information to its workers then workers can easily deals with new staffs about the company's rules.Without owner also workers can handle the business effectively.If the person is informed with new sources like email,message,fax etc it makes them smart and intelligent.
Further,well informed people are admiring in the society.If any problem arises then they may have remedial measures to solve the problem easily and quickly.They have management ability so they may give positive impact to the people.So due to these reasons it is necessary to provide information with new sources
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different information', 'a good deal of different information'.
Suggestion: much different information; a good deal of different information
...hing any person should be provided with many different information.So i agree with the statement for diffe...
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Suggestion: many
...hing any person should be provided with many different information.So i agree with the stateme...
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Suggestion: So
...rovided with many different information.So i agree with the statement for differen...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ided with many different information.So i agree with the statement for different ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...e statement for different reasons which i will explore in the following paragraph...
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Suggestion: , information
...ore in the following paragraph. First,information is the main source to be updated of som...
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Suggestion: When
...ce to be updated of something necessary.When the person is well informed then it wil...
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Suggestion: There
...erson to do any work easily and quickly.There is less change of misunderstanding and ...
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Suggestion: Well
...misunderstanding and errors in the work.Well known person can easily handle other fo...
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Suggestion: Without
...ith new staffs about the companys rules.Without owner also workers can handle the busin...
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Suggestion: If
...ers can handle the business effectively.If the person is informed with new sources...
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Suggestion: , message
... is informed with new sources like email,message,fax etc it makes them smart and intelli...
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Suggestion: , well
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...rmed people are admiring in the society.If any problem arises then they may have r...
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Suggestion: So
... may give positive impact to the people.So due to these reasons it is necessary to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38383838384 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21505805644 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.1344086022 328% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.145816499 48.9658058833 448% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 355.333333333 100.406767564 354% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 20.6045352989 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 5.45110844103 373% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198504250304 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14989999743 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848871076646 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14989999743 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848871076646 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.9 11.7677419355 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.97 58.1214874552 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.1575268817 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.0537634409 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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