Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your service. Our company have hired 100 fresh graduates and we have booked your hotel to conduct the induction program for them last week on 12th July,On the behalf of my company I have booked your hotel to for an official event, but the way we have been treated and entertained was utterly disgraceful.
Let me explain the issue which we faced during our meeting. Firstly, As per booking, meeting was planned to start at 9:00 a.m. , but the audio system was not ready for the use because of the reason , event gets delayed by 30 minutes. Second Issue we faced is air conditioner unit, the inside temperature of meeting hall was maintained at 26 degree and it leads most of the staff to feel uncomfortable.
Our company has been using your services for the past 10 years and we never had such kind of experience. It seem hotel staff need some training so that they can understand the requirement and the weightage of such type of commercial meeting.
Please make sure these type of incidents should not happened again else we have to choose some other event organizer for next time.
Your Faithfully,
Satpreet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , On
... program for them last week on 12th July,On the behalf of my company I have booked ...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eting was planned to start at 9:00 a.m. , but the audio system was not ready for ...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... ready for the use because of the reason , event gets delayed by 30 minutes. Secon...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...e never had such kind of experience. It seem hotel staff need some training so that ...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...sure these type of incidents should not happened again else we have to choose some other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56811514919 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668269230769 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1791341321 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.222222222 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268336241867 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903891945656 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055148061563 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142563740693 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612204120447 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.