TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Relationship is a feeling action which cover both spiritual estate and physical condition of a person’s life. Relationship is inseparable part in whole life. Relationships show socialization of human. Without relationship keeping life get harder. Many things are existing we should consider in any relationship. The most significant principal among theme is honesty and always telling the truth. I completely do agree that being honest in a relationship is the most critical thing which keep both sides of a relation together for a long time and we should regard.
The base of any relation is on veracity and honesty because veracity brings assurance among. If there is not honesty, there is no assurance and if there is no assurance, there is not any reason to stay together or to keep relation. Everything will break.
The trait which God Almighty likes in relation is truth. Any relation we make has to because of Allah, so due to satisfaction of Allah we should consider honesty when we are in relation.
Sometimes, people think that if they lie they will be the cause of happiness of him/her. That happiness is so short and even sometimes lie couldn’t bring happiness too but we do. The honesty is not a small thing and it isn’t hidden with a lie. One-day truth will be clarified in that time behavior will go under the question. After that the relation become cold and if this person says the truth no one will accept. These are the negative effects of lying.
At the end I have to say that we have a long life way in family, with friends, in school and university, in work and in society. In these aspect of life, we need to make relationship with people to keep our life good, always be happy and do the tasks better. In order to this we have to be honest with all otherwise, we will be alone for a long time and we never could be success alone in whole aspect of life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this aspect' or 'these aspects'?
Suggestion: this aspect; these aspects
... university, in work and in society. In these aspect of life, we need to make relationship w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, even so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64583333333 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70526219122 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494047619048 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.474495914 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 5.45110844103 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123012620835 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041707661153 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363797143416 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673883968855 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409888141407 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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