Relationship is a feeling action which cover both spiritual estate and physical condition of a person’s life. Relationship is inseparable part in whole life. Relationships show socialization of human. Without relationship keeping life get harder. Many things are existing we should consider in any relationship. The most significant principal among theme is honesty and always telling the truth. I completely do agree that being honest in a relationship is the most critical thing which keep both sides of a relation together for a long time and we should regard.
The base of any relation is on veracity and honesty because veracity brings assurance among. If there is not honesty, there is no assurance and if there is no assurance, there is not any reason to stay together or to keep relation. Everything will break.
The trait which God Almighty likes in relation is truth. Any relation we make has to because of Allah, so due to satisfaction of Allah we should consider honesty when we are in relation.
Sometimes, people think that if they lie they will be the cause of happiness of him/her. That happiness is so short and even sometimes lie couldn’t bring happiness too but we do. The honesty is not a small thing and it isn’t hidden with a lie. One-day truth will be clarified in that time behavior will go under the question. After that the relation become cold and if this person says the truth no one will accept. These are the negative effects of lying.
At the end I have to say that we have a long life way in family, with friends, in school and university, in work and in society. In these aspect of life, we need to make relationship with people to keep our life good, always be happy and do the tasks better. In order to this we have to be honest with all otherwise, we will be alone for a long time and we never could be success alone in whole aspect of life.
- in some countries teenagers have jobs while they are still students. do you think this is a good idea? 70
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 60
- In some countries teenager have jobs while they are still students. Do you think it is a good idea? Support your opinion by specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this aspect' or 'these aspects'?
Suggestion: this aspect; these aspects
... university, in work and in society. In these aspect of life, we need to make relationship w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 336.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64583333333 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70526219122 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494047619048 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.474495914 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 7.06452816374 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148499500275 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530823295287 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601414336535 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838369018083 0.162205337803 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769652915444 0.0443174109184 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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