To behave in accordance and to adhere rules is what we all were taught in our childhood, many believe it’s essential for children growth while others do not agree much with this idea. In my opinion, to a certain age child follow the regulations, after that, they need guidance not a tame on their character.
Parents provide their best to the children, they have a feeling that whatever they are doing, it’s in benefit of their young ones. As giving knowledge about right and wrong, to obey their duties and responsibilities, things about respect and gratitude, last but not least some tactics to be aware of and protected from deception. Teachers also play an eminent role in a youngster’s life after parents, mentors are there to support pillars of life. It says if adolescents abide according to the will of guardians and tutors they will be always successful in the future.
Although, to just follow the rules without using mind could be an abyss, where a tender personality of juvenile maybe lost. Every individual is different, just to carry on orders from parents and teachers can help to specific situations, but a child's own experience provides a plethora of learnings. Facing challenges on their own make them strong, creative and courageous. Examples of most beautiful minds like Einstein, Steve Jobs, Mark to name a few, most of them are dropouts, they drowned in the cascade of their will, they were not the obeyer.
By concluding my view, at the sill of adulthood, an adolescent can carry the notion of lessons from ancestors that helps them to make decisions. Despite, forced rules and over controlling could create a paradox in a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97508896797 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75023816826 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644128113879 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.577033323 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236313006557 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720467870581 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482480887778 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124198072077 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654944582543 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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