Some people think sport, art and cultural activities should be government top priority list of expenditure, however, some other think government needs to invest money to promote education, health or engineering rather than to support sports and art. Give your own view.
Sport art and culture are the essential parts of our lifestyle. A civilised society ca not be imagined without them. Some people think government need to spend more on them and encourage people to participate on sports, art and cultural activities. However, some other think education, health, and research activities should be on the top priority list of the government resources allocation. In the following paragraphs I would examine both views before making a conclusion.
Sports and cultural activities such as art, music, literature etc. makes our leisure time useful and productive. few people take it as profession. There are many benefits of higher spending on such activities. Firstly, it helps make children active, creative, engaged and socialised. There is less chance of such kids to addict to bad habits or drugs when they are busy in creative activities. secondly, cultural events, religious activities unite people in a community and hence helps to maintain peace in the society. Spending a lot of money on them is a way to maintain peace and harmony into the society.
Similarly, sports tournaments boost economic activities when people gather to watch matches from different places and even from overseas. Same way income generating activities and tourism industry is boosted by musical concert, art or literature festival. Larger investment definitely produce better artists or athletes and hence better performance and higher number audience or fans.Moreover, artists or athletes are the identity of the nation. They represent nation on the international games or functions . Those countries which have better artists or athletes wins more medals, and thus increase reputation of the nation into the international community.
On the other Side of discussion, undoubtedly higher investment on education, health and research activities is important as they are the foundation of civilised, educated, health and prosper society. Investment on health, education, science and engineering benefits not only the current generation but also the future generation. All the developed nations of present age are at this high level because they spent a lot on education and research activities in past.
In conclusion, it can be said that, investment on research, education and health is really important to develop a nation, however, investment on sport, art and culture also not less important to maintain peace and pride of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48284960422 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92836921518 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543535620053 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4604879318 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341083891428 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860508899788 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115840080141 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186685964293 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148521619529 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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