Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement?
Public authorities, sometimes, fall under criticism when they spend too much money on art activities such as the musical festival, theater, and literature. Some people argue that the money could be better utilized to improve the health, education, and security system of the community. In my point of views, although, the public sector should be given higher priority while allocating resources, spending on art activities could be also justified from several grounds.
To begin with, the public sectors such as health, education, social welfare, and community development are primarily important to develop a civilized society. They are the main indicators of quality of living of the people and therefore, improvement of these sectors is pivotal for economic prosperity. Since the healthcare sector in many countries around the world is still working with limited resources, higher funding is, of course, essential to provide extra service, to buy new medical equipment and employ more doctors and nurses. Likewise, improvement of the school building, upgrading libraries, labs, and the education system also require a substantial amount of fund. Thus, it is clearly justifiable to relocate government budget to improve health, education, and other public related issues rather than spending on unproductive sectors.
On the other hand, every civilized society has its own cultural identity and consequently, spending on music, art and literature festivals are imperative to save the identity and pride. Secondly, people need music and other art activities to get relief from a hectic modern lifestyle and therefore, we need them to grow and develop with the support of public authorities.
From the above discussion, it could be concluded that public sectors are essentially the backbone of a country and they should be undoubtedly on the top priority of the government budget, however, music, art, and other cultural activities have also their own importance and so should be given some level consideration too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, of course, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51125401929 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83836695321 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578778135048 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1114508125 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.818181818 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4545454545 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104680778873 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418908389794 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329053855346 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645823953788 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146408884866 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.