Food is daily consumption for every single person. Generally, there are two way make yourself full either cook your own food at home or pay the cost of meal and eat in restaurant. I quite believe that the people ought to prepare, eat and clean it at home rather than having meal in restaurant, but also except if some specific situations.
Firstly, many restaurants do not sell or use any fresh meal, as much as using dirty materials and unacceptable kitchen conditions. Many people lazy to cook something. What if they prepare their meal at home and bring with them or eat at home, it would affect their money, health, and time in positive way. Furthermore, during the time of cook, eat and clean the people is easily able to spend their time with their family, while your daily stress would get out with this.
However, many people also believe that time is money and cooking at home waste the time. Instead of that people is easily able to buy and eat swiftly. For some reason this might be suitable but people is not all the time busy and their health and spend time with family with a simple step much more important. Even though they might not find time to cook, while we found time many invaluable things.
In conclusion, there are many benefit to cook or prepare your own meal without thinking what bill would be, is this dishes are clean. In my opinion, people should force their self to cook and eat dinner, lunch and breakfast at home. When we see the life of important people they usually cook and clean their dishes such as Ellen Musk, Tesla, Edison, Steve job. However, I also think that people would face same cases which are dating with a girl, bored to eat at home or maybe they want to try different test, so this kind of cases are able to reason to eat in the out of home. In additional, eating in restaurant is not well place, we should not get use to do it. I believe cooking at home would be more enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...uable things. In conclusion, there are many benefit to cook or prepare your own meal withou...
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Line 4, column 651, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...nt is not well place, we should not get use to do it. I believe cooking at home wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45633802817 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1617144408 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2614022053 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0588235294 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275219317721 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104136909886 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574128778258 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191538626779 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518455765584 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.