You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you about the water leakage which is happening in our flat 205, optus society.
Yesterday I have observed leakage in the Bathroom above the Bathtub, and prior to yesterday their was no sign of such leakage. I feel that this leakage might have caused due to repair work undergoing in the next bathroom.
Due to this leakage, seepage has started occurring on the outer wall of the Bathroom. If you remember, this is similar to the same leakage which was repaired by you last year but it has reoccurred, and this time condition is more critical. In addition, their is less flow of water in taps throughout the house due to which we are facing difficulties in doing household chores.
I tried reaching the maintenance for repair work but their manager have informed us that they required approval of the owner before initiating the work. I would request you to give approval to the maintenance team by calling them at 9876655 or you can also fax them at 2333. Please reach to them as soon as possible because we are facing inconvenience due to the leakage.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Rina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ondition is more critical. In addition, their is less flow of water in taps throughou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78536585366 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53013250518 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614634146341 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5674624331 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902070677464 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373279256175 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045970231369 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531120040234 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522217025034 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.