Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we ate in the past was healthier than the food we eat today.
Health food is the one that bring enough nutrition for human body to make them health and in-shape. One of the common discussions among families and even in societies is the level of healthiness of food in the past and now. Even though some people are in the opinion that they diet in healthier food these days than the past because of some distinct reasons like their higher knowledge in modern days; but, I, personally, subscribe to this idea that people had more healthiness food in the past. Increasing in the population and our lifestyle altering brings some condition that we are in the lack of wholesomeness food.
In first place, these days by growing the population and thriving technology the world became more industrialization. Many rural lives converted to city life at the expense of deforestation. Such a change brings many kinds of pollutions like soil pollution that cause problems for planting crops. The industrialization and growing population produce more sewage and pollutant in lands and groundwater that by recycling will enter in our food. Acid rain is also a consequence of city life by which soil get more noxious to planting. Another problem in our modern days is greenhouse effect that escalated harmful radians into land alarmingly, most of which adversely have effect on farming. All of these results decrease amount of nutrition in our food in comparison to those produce in the past. For instance, my hometown was a small city with a lot of farms, meadows and nature around it. Our city had many springs and river all of that prepared a good condition to planting and herding. We always ate organic and fresh food that got us enough energy and nutrition. By going toward municipal life, our sources gradually vanished and replaced with factories, building and so on. This change extremely affects our healthy because of poor nutrition food.
Secondly, nowadays, people hold a hectic life, and they have a short time to spend on their home. Most of the people every time are in a hurry that cannot make food in their home, so most of them eat fast food which is not at all healthy. As we can see, individuals are out of shape with many diseases that rooted in their diet. For instance, in Iran, people have a lot of economic problems which make them work hard inasmuch as some of them have a secondary job in order to afford their expenses. I, as a person, am teacher at a school, and I work in a restaurant also after official time to earn more money. I don't have enough time at all to eat in my home, and I am forced to eat junk food that don't give me necessary calories and nutrition to be healthy. I recently have been under medical treatment because my iron-blood and vitamin D were very low and I need to be under care. Such a problem originate from my food habitation. In the contrast, in the past, all of us eat our mother prepared food because those days we had a calm life with time to spend for preparing food and so on, so we were more health than now.
In summary, by taking all of these into account, in my opinion, the level of healthiness of food in the past isn’t at all comparable with these days' food. All of us eat low nutritional food because of the effects of industrialization and our busy life in the way of our feeding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 106.0 52.1666666667 203% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2707.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 586.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61945392491 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63837150626 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448805460751 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 860.4 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2840175219 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.259259259 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7037037037 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07407407407 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248776174699 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699184687085 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692083009952 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16959021272 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356881964595 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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