The reading passage states the population decline of sea otter depends on the population of an environment, not from the predators. However, the professor refutes arguments of an author which presented in the passage.
First and foremost, the reading claims the rate of chemical pollution of water which causes by the oil rigs and other industries decrease the survival resistance of a sea otter. On the other hand, the professor interprets people do not found any dead body of the otter which opposes the idea and trigger a new one. According to her, if the predator eats the otter, nothing remains in that place.
Secondly, the article indicates that the main predator orca of otter prefers to hunt enormous sized animal such as whales rather than small mammals. In contrast, the lecturer argued that the population of whales also decline because of the human hunting which increases the risk of the otter to hunted by the predators.
Thirdly and finally, the passage suggests that the decline rate related to the current of water by the result of researchers. Nonetheless, the lecturer made a counterclaim to the point by explaining the location of the deep water is more convenient for the orcas to live which increase the rate of decline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.4613686534 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 22.412803532 22% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 209.0 270.72406181 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.995215311 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62686833721 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6296098237 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06452816374 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305638607238 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118420621825 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779060784071 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167954088594 0.162205337803 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477857609063 0.0443174109184 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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