Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is clear that, sport has been an integral part of human life throughout the history. Apparently, nowadays people who are engaged in sports are significantly ahead of people occupied with other jobs in terms of making living. Whether the great amount of earned money is fair or not has always triggered debate. To my mind, there are strong arguments on behalf of both views. Therefore, before jumping to conclusion, this topic needs to be discussed by and large.
To begin with, considering time consuming trainings, without any doubt, sportsmen are among the most diligent people. Since, they wo...
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