Reading and lecture talks about the Auten it of a painting
depicted famous English novelists Jane Austen. Reading argues that there are reasons to believe that character painted in painter was her,while lecture thinks that those reasons are not logical.
First, reading states that Austen family after her death allowed to exhibit her picture
coupled with her letters. Lecture casts doubt on this statement made in the reading. In contrast,
he put forth the fact that letters were given in 1882, that was about seventy years after she died. So there might be strong chances that painter might not have seen her.
Second, reading posits another reason to witness her painting by explaining the similarity in the sketch of
Cassandra painting. In addition, reading says that even if painting by Cassandra when Austen was adult, the nose structure,
shape of face and other characteristics are analogous. While, lecture denies by saying that many of her cousins, girls, daughters in family possessed some similar features. Furthermore, he refutes that Mary one of her niece was the character in that painting.
Third, reading claims painting was created when Austen was teenager that even if painting is without any proof. Due to the fact that Humprey was a painter appointed by affluent family when was young. In contrary professor thinks that original painting was formed on canvas and Austen was probably twenty seven years older when the canvas base was invented. As a consequence, lecture successfully refutes the comments made in reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...her death allowed to exhibit her picture coupled with her letters. Lecture casts ...
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...plaining the similarity in the sketch of Cassandra painting. In addition, reading...
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...ormed on canvas and Austen was probably twenty seven years older when the canvas base was in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, third, while, as for, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 249.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26104417671 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4540551615 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574297188755 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3541174963 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.09492273731 220% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353000440819 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122299026993 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825618962639 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148054645361 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930735465068 0.0443174109184 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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