Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really.interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear John,
I have read about a computer course your company is offering and I am writing this letter to express my interest. First, let me brief you about my academic background. I have completed my bachelor’s degree in commerce; followed by Master’s in Business Administration. I had never got the chance to study computer as a course, but it’s always been very fascinating to me. I have been using computer at my home and my workplace for a good long time.
I read your advertisement details about advance excel in 30 days. It seems very informative and useful to me and I would definitely like to enroll for it. The knowledge will certainly help me perform office tasks more efficiently and in smart way.
However, I am afraid to inform you that I do not fulfill your criteria of having prior elementary course. As I mentioned earlier that I have not studied computer at academics level. Could I ask you for a favor to exempt the eligibility criteria in my case and register me for this course?
I shall be grateful to you for this. Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours Sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I have read about a computer course your...
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Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s;s always been very fascinating to me. I have been using computer at my home and...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd my workplace for a good long time. I read your advertisement details about a...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eria of having prior elementary course. As I mentioned earlier that I have not stu...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you in anticipation. Yours Sincerely, Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76683937824 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9756905678 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6480163482 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7142857143 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363580881899 0.216113520407 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117024630164 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728278233237 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215207603466 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110078762069 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.