The truth is every world is changing and we are also changing accordingly. Few people feels that because of changing technology and modernism leads to unhappy life. But, we are enjoying our life our more than ever before that makes me to disagree with the statement which states we are less happy in our life when compare with few decades earlier.
To begin with, now there are so many advancement in technology. Take for example, transportation, in the past to travel to Europe to US it took four month in the ship. But, now ships can reach the destination with five days don't think it is amazing and we are happily moving wherever we want- distance does not matter now. No stress nothing, just enjoying. Some says eventhough voyage was longer time they had some fun among themselves as one family, of course, now reduced in many folds.
In additionally, improvement in sanitation and medical field which healthier and happier way lifestyle, no one can question it. For example, earlier because of the T.B. so many people died during it is epidemic session which they could not control it because lack knowledge in the medicine. Because of that-they isolated so be love from away and sometimes exile from the society-that is not happy life. Now there is advanced drugs for this disease, all needs only two weeks course no need of any separation from the family. Most of the people says that because industrialisation human health also gets spoiled by pollution and water contamination and so on. But, changing world still it bring remedy for the problem and people are living happily.
Finally, the happiness depends on hoe you perceive it. Today, there are so many clubs not only for the young people but also the older generation being benefited this. Earlier, they used to talk with their family or their surrounding people and the worst part were-always gossiping which every bad way of getting pleasure. But in clubs just have fun even with other country citizen, they broken space-time barrier which gives universal happiness rather than well in the frog. That is what the feature generation want to learn from us, nothing else more.
To conclude, changing world brought technological advancement, improved the public health and more social-interaction at international- these are main factors which brings happiness to the people. And, it is advantages over-weighed it's disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advancement seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much advancement', 'a good deal of advancement'.
Suggestion: much advancement; a good deal of advancement
... To begin with, now there are so many advancement in technology. Take for example, transp...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... to travel to Europe to US it took four month in the ship. But, now ships can reach t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...an reach the destination with five days dont think it is amazing and we are happily ...
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...and so on. But, changing world still it bring remedy for the problem and people are l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le are living happily. Finally, the happiness depends on hoe you perceive it...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...antages over-weighed its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, if, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in fact, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06783919598 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75142607493 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600502512563 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5831105859 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0476190476 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254668657158 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668411625508 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510837238315 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127754198052 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533474581648 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.