Without a shadow of the doubt, life has been changed dramatically from last few decades which often arises a provoked question, whether people are living more happily in now a day or not. In my opinion, old people generation was more satisfied. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will discuss in the following ways.
First and foremost, with the advent of modern technology, every person wants all the luxurious things in his life, to fulfil the dreams, people are working day and night. There are number of issues has increased which directly or indirectly effect our mental health. My friend’s experience is a compelling example of this. After passing degree in computer science, he started working in a big company, in order to earn more money, he used to spend maximum hours in the office. His work schedule was actually tight that he was not able to enjoy small beautiful things in his life including spending time with family, playing with kids and any sport activity. Suddenly, he found changes in his health and diagnosed with mental depression and now he is under the observation, and learning new ways to stay positive in his life. However, his parents were extremely contended in the past days even with the small house and low income, hence it is proved that materialistic world can provide us facilities but not happiness.
Secondly, inflation has increased at rapid pace after globalization, every day new things are introduced in the market. It becomes very difficult to handle the expenses of daily life, so husband and wife, both works hard in these days. Gone are days, when only husband’s income was enough to raise the kids and can feed the family. Now, Situations are precisely hard for parents that they can not spend much time with their children. I remember when I was in the fifth grade, my mom used to help me in the home work and had spent entire day with me. On the other hand, being a mother of four-year-old, I am awfully busy in my job, I could not get time to involve in small activities of my son. Most of the time he spends at day care and after wards we usually go to sleep. So, my friends were more prosperous and fortune than us, who had spent maximum time to raise their kids happily.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, past generation’s life was less burdensome as compared to us. Moreover, there was not race to get all the materialistic things, their simple lives kept them joyful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7365967366 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6193663104 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6402202258 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144071104551 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410901709236 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332163598895 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854418271484 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179157962456 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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