Big family mean , having caring people whom you can count on when you are worst situation.
Although with the development of cities, invention of technology and busy schedule extended family is second priority for people.
I personally concur with the statement that extended family is less important now than it was in past for the following reasons:
To begin, nowadays people have busy schedule, need to develop their living standards.
For instance, I'm working 8 hours daily, at weekend I take rest I hardly find time to meet my parents i dont have that much time and passions to visit families.
Furthermore, with the invention of internet people are tend to be more in communication via internet than meeting.
In addition, with the development of cities people prefer to live separately I have personal experience in past my mom was living in very extended family she had grandparents , parents , aunts, uncles but now we are living in very small sized family.
Last but not least, people want to be independent , extended family some time cause interference in personal decision making, also extended family mean more responsibly and pressure for example, ladies in big family need to cook for large number people therefor, people prefer to live separately because much much convience.
To sum up; considering mentioned reason people give less importance to extended family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Big family mean , having caring people whom you can count...
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Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the worst'.
Suggestion: are the worst
...g people whom you can count on when you are worst situation. Although with the developme...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... their living standards. For instance, Im working 8 hours daily, at weekend I tak...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...I hardly find time to meet my parents i dont have that much time and passions to vis...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thermore, with the invention of internet people are tend to be more in communicat...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to be more in communication via internet than meeting. In addition, with the d...
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Line 11, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ery extended family she had grandparents , parents , aunts, uncles but now we are ...
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Line 11, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed family she had grandparents , parents , aunts, uncles but now we are living in ...
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Line 13, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...not least, people want to be independent , extended family some time cause interfe...
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Line 13, column 305, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: much
...eople prefer to live separately because much much convience. To sum up; considering me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29017857143 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72961751684 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3047917846 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.125 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203616324441 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972630188297 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670859311109 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990329382025 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100665441448 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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