The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Arwinder on Sun, 10/14/2018 - 11:43

The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of used water in six continents of the world for three different purposes.
Evidently,the water is used for agricultural purpose in four areas of the world,extensively,in those Africa,Central Asia and South East Asia that is accounted for between 81% to 88%,while South Africa is for 71%,whereas North America and Europe used water almost same that is 39% of former and 32% of latter.
Moving further,the water used by industries in North America is 48% and in Europe just over a half. However,left three continents that is figured for insignificant minority in this. For domestic purposes highest only in South America to 19% than others,North America and Europe used water 13% and 15% respectively.Another three spheres’ total used water percentage is 23%
Hence,the maximum water used for irrigation in all areas in contrary,less proportion seen for domestic uses in all continents.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ormer and 32% of latter. Moving further,the water used by industries in North Ameri...
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... and in Europe just over a half. However,left three continents that is figured for in...
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...nificant minority in this. For domestic purposes highest only in South America to 19% than other...
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...ope used water 13% and 15% respectively.Another three spheres' total used water pe...
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...apos; total used water percentage is 23% Hence,the maximum water used for irrigat...
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...tal used water percentage is 23% Hence,the maximum water used for irrigation in al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41095890411 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48187813166 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.906688285 43.030603864 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.0 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261224925367 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147362309663 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854539000748 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183752715462 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485103266289 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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