Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet How accurate is this statement Are there any other bigger threats to mankind

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Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet.

How accurate is this statement?

Are there any other bigger threats to mankind?

Submitted by LAKSHI on Wed, 10/17/2018 - 11:19

Global warming is the biggest threat to life on the planet. I do not believe that this is true because of measure are available to control this. Incurable diseases are another challenging threat to human extinction.

There are many initiatives, which can implement to reduce the effects of global warming and the greenhouse effect. So many countries have already taken the steps for this. The primary purpose of these steps is to decrease the release of carbon dioxide into the air. Once the CO2 level decrease, which contributes to the prevention of possibilities to change the climate unexpectedly. These measures are planting of trees, recycling of waste, drive less and increase use of public transportation, consume energy efficient products and save electricity. For example, Switzerland has introduced a small bike with zero emission which calls Zerotracer. This bike is emission-free, and it can drive speed of 250 Khm. Because of this, we can prevent changes in climate, and this is not the biggest threat.

Incurable diseases are another challenging threat, which has not resolved yet. There are many kinds of illness, that is no curable medicine like lung cancer, Leukemia, Dengue fever, and AIDS. Scientists are still experimenting to find curable medicines for those, but they have not succeeded yet. Because of this, daily a lot of people die around the world. This has become a crucial issue in some countries. If somebody diagnoses with an incurable, who cannot survive a long time. Unfortunately, it can lose our life or our loved ones. For example, according to the American Cancer Society, approximately 560,000 of people die yearly. As a result of this, incurable degases have become a threat to human survival on the earth.

In conclusion, Climate change is not the greatest threat to humanity, because we can control the adverse impact of global warming and the greenhouse effect. Another danger is incurable diseases, as this leads to many deaths.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81669132139 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4925136456 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5454545455 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23331580296 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716078129878 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866073317989 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164475856547 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602116702089 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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