Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there is an opinion that History is a compulsory part of education. But some humans disagree and believe that Science and Technology subjects are more significant than History. This essay will first discuss both these points of view and after demonstrate my own opinion.
It is clear that History builds the worldview of children and illustrates mistakes that have been made by people in the past. Knowing the past bad experiences provides the protection from repeating them in the future. For instance, people after the world wars have recognized the circumstances that caused by wars. Now, people try to solve problems due to diplomats in account of the past experiences.
On the other hand, people are close to energy problems, like the lack of oil and gas in the near future. It leads to needs in professionals in Science and Technology. For example, most universities in Russia are interested in applicants who have passed Physics after graduating school. It leads to deep understanding Physics by future students and potential employees. All these situations impact on solving the energetic problems.
In my opinion History is crucial for people. Because of all problems must be considered according to history. Going back to the last example, solving the energy problems can be more efficient if people base their works on history of the using the energy resources. For example, people can expell previous oil and gas fields from their focus when they want to discover new sources of oil and gas.
Overall, Science and Technology are vital for people future, but these subjects must be based on History.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...lems due to diplomats in account of the past experiences. On the other hand, people are close...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... opinion History is crucial for people. Because of all problems must be considered acco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15413533835 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70570415644 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5187259301 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6470588235 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6470588235 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269722507429 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779247740362 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619448363455 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15525273888 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726151475505 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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