In some socities stress is now regarded as a major problem and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past. However, others feel that the amount of stress people have today is exaggerated they say that previous generations were under more pressure But the idea of suffering from stress did not exist discuss both views and give your opinion
It is incontrovertible fact that stress became a serious problem for all people. Some people believed that nowadays we are frequently coped with more pressure than before whereas, others accord that nowadays people make the stress enlarges. And, the old people have a lot of pressure but this concept did not exist in the past. This essay examines the both aspects and argues that the earlier people suffering the more stress as compared to modern people.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why the modern people suffer with this problem. The first and foremost is people want to achieve the success in their life and, they do the struggle for this. However, the face plethora of problem because, now people living in a global village, and they face the competition in every stage of their life. For example, every person want to do the study in a higher college or school as well as they want to do the high standard job. But, if they do not achieve this they feel the pressure in their mind also, they tolerate the peer pressure. Furthermore, pollution is the second cause of stress and it creates a lot of serious health problems like the cancer, headache and breathing diseases. They spent the huge amount of money for the treatment of this disease and sometime people have not money for these diseases so, it became the cause of stress.
On the other hand, life of the previous generations was no less stressful. Initially, they had no technology gadgets and, they had faced a lot of difficulties in doing everything on their own. After doing this work they felt tired as well felt the stress in their mind. Moreover, as a result of war and poverty became the largest problems most people and numerous people were killed because of it. Nowadays, mental illness resulting from stress such as depression and social anxiety did not exist in pastime.
I believe that, the recent generation face the more pressure because, several decades before, human living conditions were better than today with green environment, fresh water and air and this help people might easily to reduce their stress. However, they were also coped with a numerous problem, for example war, disasters which kill a million people. But, they did not face the problem regarding the success, relationship and the environment which became the main causes of nowadays.
In conclusion, it is really hard for people to compare whether living today and previous which make more pressure to people, because each generation's life have own problems. It is expected that people should concentrate on reducing the pressure and establish positive living condition for next generation in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lties in doing everything on their own. After doing this work they felt tired as well...
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Line 8, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...e more pressure to people, because each generations life have own problems. It is expected ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94900221729 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44403637429 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50332594235 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9823326873 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4761904762 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52380952381 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40412638111 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120521577564 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410450121271 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231395007259 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059391759089 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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