Argument Essay
In recent years, Braeburn Corporation has seen lagging sales of its food products. Just a few of the many food products Braeburn sells are soy products.Soy products have been shown to reduce rates of cancer. Because people care about reducing their risk of cancer, Braeburn should increase manufacturing of soy products. This will help Braeburn Corporation improve sales and increase profits.
The author puts forth an argument wherein he states that increase in soy products will improve sales and held Braeburn Corporation to increase profits. This conclusion is however based on unsound premises. The author firstly presumes that people are especially concerned with reducing the risk of cancer, which in fact is a generalized concern with every human being. Further the author supposes that people actually make efforts such as including soy products in their food consumption. The author also makes a presupposes that other soy products even the few that the company produces have high sal...
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