Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reason and examples to support your answer.
Today, life is more complicated than past decades and each of us encounter many different and difficult situations in the life. Some people think living in moments and enjoy the lifetime are ways to pass the difficulties of the life whoever in my opinion, people having plan for their life have a big power to overcome the complicated life. The ensuing paragraphs explain reasons to support my greenness.
First of all, have a plan for life and the ability to organize it is a powerful means to overcome the sophisticated life. Plan makes a route to save time, energy, and also money, so in this way peoples can win in harsh and complexity of life. People who have not organized mind and life, always try to test different work or experts consequently they always loss their time and energy. For example, my father is not an organized person thus he always change his job and does the things having no purpose as a result he often waste his time and money to try new but useful less things.
Secondly, people having plan for whole their life are often be successful than others and can win in the life's ups and downs. This is a fact that happiness followed by success and success influence by the way we can pass the life's difficulties. It is crystal clear that organized people are more successful than others having not road map in their life.
Furthermore, opponents of the statement believe that plan and rules make the life harsh and stressful and in this way they cannot enjoy the moments of the life. Obviously, they ignore the fact that happiness is nothing expect a sense of internal satisfaction and no one can enjoys the life without this sense. Thus, to have incredible moments in the difficulties of the life people have to be organized.
In summary, everyday life shows us a different face which is make us some complex situations so, have plan and be organized person are the keys to over these situation. Thus, I think it is better to have plan because it brings happiness and success for people and also they do not waste their time, energy and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...n past decades and each of us encounter many different and difficult situations in the life. S...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... life and the ability to organize it is a powerful means to overcome the sophisticated lif...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
... not an organized person thus he always change his job and does the things having no p...
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Line 2, column 572, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun things is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...is time and money to try new but useful less things. Secondly, people having plan f...
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Line 4, column 274, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'enjoy'
Suggestion: enjoy
...of internal satisfaction and no one can enjoys the life without this sense. Thus, to h...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...ake us some complex situations so, have plan and be organized person are the keys to...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...e organized person are the keys to over these situation. Thus, I think it is better to have pla...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...ion. Thus, I think it is better to have plan because it brings happiness and success...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, in summary, as a result, by the way, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63858695652 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47785412137 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470108695652 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9534241384 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5333333333 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260849306439 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106749699281 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495994755387 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165604269222 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328143660201 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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