The pie charts highlight the proportion of water used for industrial, agriculture and domestic work in six continents of the world. The data is calibrated in percentage.
It is vivid that water was majorly used in North America was in industrial area figured as 43% and Europe followed the similar trend being higher than by 10%. Interestingly, almost similar amount of water was used in domestic work in these two areas noted as nearly 15%. Moreover, a small difference of 7% was witnessed in utilisation of water for agriculture in North America(39%) and Europe (32%). Apart from this, about seventy one percent of water enable agriculture in South America and less then by 52% is used in household work. Also, least one in ten percent water was used in industries.
Strolling forth towards agriculture based areas in which water is major source of agriculture, Africa consumes 84% of water for agriculture which was inclined by 4% for Central Asia farmers and abated by 3% for agriculture in South East Asia. However, both Central Asia and South East Asia used similar percentage of water for domestic chores but Africa used similar percentage of water for industries, accounted as 7%. Beside this, Central Asia and South East Asia utilised 5% and 12% of water for industrial area respectively while least percentage of water was used for domestic purpose in Africa.
Overall, agriculture cause the great consumption of water in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia but Europe and North America utilise mostly water for industrial area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: seventy-one
... and Europe 32%. Apart from this, about seventy one percent of water enable agriculture in ...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e agriculture in South America and less then by 52% is used in household work. Also,...
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Line 5, column 529, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the least'.
Suggestion: while the least
... water for industrial area respectively while least percentage of water was used for domest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08560311284 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68995168323 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482490272374 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6326499058 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219033300858 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105498259194 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597187744655 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149302070473 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435156688268 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.