The table gives information about the manufacture of cars in argentina, Australia and Thailand during the six period between 2003 and 2009.
As can be seen from the chart, the majority of car production was made in Thailand while Argentina was the lowest comparison in three countries.
In 2003, the largest car was produced in Thailand at 700,000 cars while Argentina accounted for 4000,000 cars, doubling the figure of Autralia.
In two years later, the production of cars in Thailand increased and peaked at 1,119,000 cars; however, Argentina decreased by 200,000 cars. The opposite was true for Australia which rose at 400,000 cars.
Nevertheless, in 2009, Thailand was a slight decrease to 999,000 cars and Argentina went down to 161,000 cars. In contrast, the number of cars was repeated in Australian that went up to 600,000 cars.
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Cambridge 6 test 1 task 1 73
- The table below shows show the number of cars made in Argentina, Australia and Thailand from 2003 to 2009. 78
- The diagram below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for change to the school site in 2024.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant 67
- The diagram below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for change to the school site in 2024.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant 78
- The table below shows how young people in Tokyo, Japan, listened to music over the previous month. The pie chart shows a record company’s international findings about whether people preferred live or recorded music.Summarize the information by selecting 79
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 709.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17518248175 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70569675459 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7965893131 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12275191014 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071544563783 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506627491894 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882158669563 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489021472387 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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