Some people think that having a set retirement age( 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation , is unfair. They belive that certain workers deserve to retire and recive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Every occupation has a criteria for retirement and pension. In general sence the retirement age is nere by 60 to 65 years.some people think that this age limit should be reduce otherwise it will be unfair for them. In this easy will discuss about the workers who deserve retirement at an earlier age and also discuss which type of workers get this benefit.
The rule of fixing the age of retirement was introduced in earlier age when company law introduced first.
In that time people’s health was good and they live long. So on the basis of that retirement age get fixed at 65. But now a days people does not have a good food quality, not get good weather, more pollution and because of this the living age get reduced. So the basic fundamental is that after retirement worker can take rest for balance life. So this the reason ,worker can get the benefit for earlier retirement.
The person who is working in the office such as on manager level, management level, professional people who is having brain work not a physical work not have a necessity to get retire at early age. But those wprker who is doing physical work in factories or on field work must get the benefit.
On the otherside, if worker get retire earlier then company cannot get the advantage of experience people.secondly, person can also get bored after some days because he has a capacity to do work but he has no work to do.
In conclusion, those people who have a physical work can get the benefit of earky retirement and pension, but people who work in management position who have to use his experience does not required to retire early as his experience count benefited for company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a criterion' or simply 'criteria'?
Suggestion: a criterion; criteria
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Message: Did you mean 'reduced'?
Suggestion: reduced
...ple think that this age limit should be reduce otherwise it will be unfair for them. I...
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Suggestion: nowadays
...hat retirement age get fixed at 65. But now a days people does not have a good food qualit...
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...ty to get retire at early age. But those wprker who is doing physical work in fac...
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Suggestion: than
...otherside, if worker get retire earlier then company cannot get the advantage of exp...
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...xperience count benefited for company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68243243243 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.585393313 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6986247332 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336991544412 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139211492746 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628876528178 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180328740761 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868277290041 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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