The trend of on line shopping is increasing significantly. What effect does it have on the environment and society in general.
It is undisputed that shopping has become an indispensable part of everyone's life. Presently, the use of on line shopping is tremendously increasing around the world. Here, I would like to account the effect of this happening on the environment and society.
There are manifold negative outcomes of on line shopping on the community. First and foremost, a massive number of people have become extravagant on account of e-shopping. To demonstrate, nowadays people tendency to visit on line shopping websites where they are fully attracted towards astonishing product that are shown in the great packages. Besides that, the websites influence the consumer's buying behaviour by offering heavy discounts, special offers such buy one get one free. Consequently, people become intend to buy unnecessary products.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, buying excessive things direct towards the problem of rubbish. As an evidence, people buy more and more new things that are packed into the plastic boxes and wrappers. Ultimately, such wrappers and plastic boxes are deliberately thrown on the vacant lands besides reusing it.
In addition to it, a considerable rise in the amount of rubbish degrades the quality of environment. To the specific, non-biodegradable things remain on the land for the prolong period that decline the quality and fertility of soil. As a result, rubbish problem has become the serious concern in modern societies.
To recapitulate, undeniably, on line shopping has numerous effects. It is clear that it has become rising problem on societies. So that, people and government should take proactive measures to eliminate this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
... intend to buy unnecessary products. Further emphasizing on my point of view, buying...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...egradable things remain on the land for the prolong period that decline the quality and fer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44787644788 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98347440781 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.198382736 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125810137091 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435644675273 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598612207878 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713170532372 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753178856315 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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